From our draft of our thriller we got feedback from the class and the teacher, the feedback helped us to make some changes to our thriller and also they gave use feedback on things they like.
one of the feedbacks was were to cut the story of the ex-boyfriend as the storyline is to long for our 2 minute shot so we have decide to cut the ex-boyfriend storyline to just an stalker as it makes the thriller more realistic. Also one of the feedbacks were to re-film the shot of the letter scene as the lighting is to dark and also was to add more to the letter scene by filming an shot of the stalker cutting up the letters from the newspaper and see him making the letter but we are going to use a range of shots but not shots of his face so the audience can’t see the stalkers emotion. We also need to cut the effect of the blur as it makes the shot look out of place also we are going to cut the scene of the footsteps shorter and slower to make it look more dramatic. We have decided to change the editing decision by cutting between the girl and the boy to make it more dramatic.We are also going to add more to the credits and change the credits to make them longer and more effective.
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